Term 3- Developing Ideas Criterion B

Here is my first draft:

Reflection

My project is a story scratch so the first step is to think of 1 idea and draw it as a draft.So, my first idea for my story is about a girl that borrowed an interesting book and then when she left it open and slept in the night the next morning all that was left on the bed were leaves that came out of the book and on the bed it was written in red '' she was warned '' and the girl was not there. The way I thought of this idea was because I remembered how I wrote it when I was young si I decided to use it as my idea for a story.Until now I have just started the process for creating the actual project which is to make a scratch that tells my story.I think my first design is very interesting and  is very good because I think it is a quite innovative type of story as it is not a story that you hear about every now and then,however, I think in my next design I  can improve it a little bit more in terms of creativeness and in terms of art digitally but also in terms of drawing.To conclude I think my first draft is very good and innovative but I will attempt to improve in my next draft to make the story a little bit better next time.

Here is my second draft :

Reflection:

This is my second draft,in this draft I improved the same story I illustrated in the first draft by summarizing it and making it shorter as it was too long in the first draft.Until now I am in the second step of the whole project which is improving on the first draft and then editing it by drawing a second draft to improve the story and the first draft in general.The reason I chose to do so was because I wanted to make my scratch short and interesting rather than making it very long for no reason .I think what went very successful during this process was when I thought of an idea of a way to improve it then drew the actual draft  with not too many struggles ,another thing that I think went very well when I made the second draft was the way I colored the draft to visualize and give a little detail about the story but also to help me create the story from scratch at the end of the project .However I think a way I can improve for the  next time is maybe if I showed a little more detail in the characters and the actual story like I did in the first draft but in the same time not to make it way too long to make it detailed.To conclude I am very proud of the assignment and the way I improved my first draft but I will still try to improve in the next time.

Here is my third draft:

Reflection:

Here is an image of my third draft.Until now I am in the third step of this project which is to make the third draft for the story I will be creating from scratch at the end of this project.In my third draft I decided to make a different idea for my story,I decided to make it about 2 girls that find a treasure box full of gold but then find out all that gold was fake and it was just chocolate the whole time.The reason I chose to do so was because I wanted to have the option to choose from 2 stories when it comes to creating my story from scratch.What I believe went well during the process of making the draft was being able to think of a new idea for a story to do for my scratch projects but also putting some detail into the story  and making it nice and short so it does not become too long.However, I think something I can improve on for next time is that maybe I can try to add some more details in the draft so I can easily be able to create the same story I drew into the format of a story from scratch where I will show the story digitally.Even though I had 1 struggle I think it was very easy to accomplish and wasn't that difficult.To conclude I think I have done really well in this draft,I also think that this assignment was very enjoyable but also very beneficial for me I will also still try to improve next time. 

Final Reflection

After analyzing and  checking all 3 of my drafts I have decided to choose 1 of them to do my scratch on, the one that I have chosen is the first draft.The reason I have chosen this draft is that I believe even though it is the longest one and is the same story as my second draft I think it is the most interesting out of all 3 of them and also the most one which is amusing and fun out of all 3 of the drafts.The reason I believe the first one is the most interesting is that the second is the same story but it is much shorter so it is not very detailed which is something that my first draft contains also I think that it is more interesting and unique because in the second draft it was short so I didn't really think it would be as enjoyable as the first draft and it might have been too short.Next, the reason I chose the first draft over the third draft was I think I didn't put much effort in thinking of that story for it to be better than the first since in the first one I put a lot of effort not in drawing it in detail and color but the actual story itself (as it was a story that I wrote in grade 3 then decided to make a scratch now) on the other hand I didn't really give as much effort as I did to the first rather than  to the third one which is why I preferred the first one, on the other hand my third also had common flaws with my second on the third one wasn't that detailed too and was quite short and not that interesting or enjoyable like the second one.To conclude I think that I have done a good job in all my 3 drafts and have completed them well but I did a better job in my first draft which is why I have chosen to make it for my upcoming scratch project which will be to create this story using scratch programming.